The Characters I made. Suggestions. Meep.

Bella:
A servant of the Shadow Realm
A sword forged in shadow
Thoughts of its own
Name is Zar'oc
Wears a mask of red silk to hide identity
Is actually a woman
Has the power of magic
Blend in with shadow
Freeze spell
Fire ball
Confusion spell
Read the minds of the Weak
Take over one's body
Favorite servant of the Shadow Lord
Recieve pain in exchange for spells
Life only survives if serving the Shadow Lord
Exile if telling of the secrets
True Name
X'meza Timill
Half - Elf Half - Shadow Creature
Shapshifts into a Black Owl
Not accepted by either race. Only by the Shadow Lord
For her natural power
And is the daughter of the Shadow Lord (maybe, not sure)


James:
Lord of everything Shadow
Appears in a human form
Black suit, black cape
Black hair
Red eyes
Horns - deep blood red
True Form
Gargoyle
Curled tip horns
Dragon like skin
10 Ft Tall
Red eyes
Massive Wings - 50 Ft Span
Came to exsistance by sheer will
Passion to convert all the strong to shadow
Make life a black abyss of chaos
True Name
Garmezeal


Sam:
Exiled servant of the Shadow Realm
Warned humans about Lords plan
Was ripped of magic, and sword companion
Became a drunk in disguise
Talks to self in loneliness
Was a pure shadow creature but turned human
Was friends with Bella unil exiled
Desperate for power
True Name
Chardelam
Sword Name
Medrill